On September 11th, 2001 the terrorist group Al Qaeda led by Osama bin Laden launched an attack against the United States and its citizens. They terrorists hijacked four American airplanes mid-flight they flew two of the planes into the World Trade Center in New York City, another into the Pentagon which is the headquarters of our military in Arlington VA destroying a section of the building, the fourth and final plane crashed into a field in Pennsylvania. The impact of the crash on the World Trade Center resulted in it catching fire and eventually collapsing. Officials believe that the passengers on board fought the terrorists which prevented them from achieving their final mission and that their target was either the White House or the United States Capitol. Almost 3000 people lost their lives in the 9/11 attacks. President George Bush implemented the Global War on Terrorism in the aftermath of the attacks. Security at public buildings, military installations around the globe and at airports was tightened, and the “Department of Homeland security and the National Counter Terrorism Center” (The World after 9/11) was created. The US government started increasing its military operations and started pressing those groups it believed to be associated with terrorist activities or accused of sheltering them. The US invaded Afghanistan with the aim of removing any members of the Taliban regime whom they believed were harboring Al Qaeda in an attempt of capturing bin Laden and his co-conspirators. Today many members of AL Qaeda has been captured or killed and on May 11, 2011 members of the US Navy seal killed bin Laden while he was in hiding in Pakistan.
After
the attacks many US citizens joined together to help the families of the
victims, many paid tribute to the brave firefighters and policemen who risked
their lives trying to save those in the rubble. There was a surge in patriotism
marked by displays of the flag, tributes to the victims and some went so far as
to sign up for and join the military. For many enlisting in the military was
their way of giving back
to their country, they wanted to fight for and defend our nations freedom. For
them it was a chance to give something back to their country for the freedom
it’s allowed them to have, and they considered it an honor to serve. To them
the flag was a symbol of its people, not its government and they wanted to help
defend against those who were willing to do anything to destroy our way of
life. Post 9/11 our leaders
has become more diligent. We now have a security infrastructure aimed foreseeing
and thwarting future attacks. The Department of Homeland Security and the National Counter-terrorism Center was created to better share intelligence between the
intelligence community, and other agencies around the world. The
events of September 11 have led to more improved security in our airports,
military installations, embassies’, etc., both home and abroad. America has had the ability to
disrupt the core of the Al Qaeda network; it has captured and killed many of
its top officials including their leader Bin Laden. People today are more aware
of their surroundings, we now have trained officials on board our airplanes to prevent
and detain those who acting suspiciously.
In the weeks
after the attacks, many people of Middle Eastern descent became the victims of
hate crimes and harassment from both the government and the public. These people
were picked on by the people arrested and detained for questioned by our government.
Many believe that the
terrorist attack of September 11th was used as a way to justify the Iraqi
war. They believe conservatives poisoned the memory of 9/11 and instead of
unifying the nation, members of our government raced to cash in on the tragedy.
They believe that the war in Iraq was uncalled for and had nothing to do with
9/11. They view the new security measures as a way to molest citizens at
airports, to torture prisoners and to bankrupt the nation. The article The World After 9 /11 tells us that, “Guantanamo and
Abu Ghraib are 9/11’s legacy and will forever tarnish America”. These prisons
are used by our government as a way to torture those we view as the enemy. Opposition
of the Patriot Act views it as a violation of the rights to privacy, and is
against any government that would infringe on the rights of its people.


Yes, I think that we are safer today
than before the attacks but I’m also know that that does not mean that another attack
cannot occur sometime in the future. Given how determined our enemies are securing
our nation against terror is a top priority. As a nation we will never be truly
safe but we can continue to be vigilant. Although the US has been successful in
foiling the plans of our enemies
Facts:
- "Forty two terrorist attacks have been thwarted since the events of 9/11 (Patriot Act Debate: Ron Paul vs. Gingrich
- “People had begun to doubt whether American power was truly power; and to ask whether its day was past” (Killing Bin Laden: what it means for the war on terrorism)
- “There are 51 federal organizations and military commands, she says, that track the flow of money to and from terrorist networks (The top secret America created after Sept. 11)
- “Guantanamo and Abu Ghraib are 9/11’s legacy and will forever tarnish America” (The world after 9/11)
- The Department of Homeland security and the National Counter Terrorism Center was created in response to 9/11 (The World after 9/11)
Great post!
ReplyDeleteGood article!
This is a very comprehensive article about 9/11, with lots of facts and angles. I enjoyed reading it very much, and I think it is very informative.
I think that it could be cleaned up just a bit (found a few typos), and that your thesis could be more clearly defined.
Did America overreact to 9/11? You answer yes or no - and keep answering that throughout the article. That way, your readers know, then entire time, what your thesis is and what you're trying to convince them of.
Your post is very convincing, with it's facts, examples, and professional tone. It just needs a consistency around the thesis. Make sense?
Another suggestion: all the facts in your fact list should also be incorporated into the article. They are great facts! How are you going to use them for your argument? Put them to power within the context of your article.
Great work. Take these suggestions and try to infuse them into your next post.
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